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1-You are to improve the entire attached essay by integrating personal pronouns also fix the thesis statement.
2-find a more meaningful essay title
3- DONT add any other sources, please.
4- no changes necessary in the citation.
5- proofread, correct any grammar errors.
MLA format, times new roman, double spacing
6- please get rid of the family, warfare, courage and home words on top of each paragraph. please incorporate those in the paragraph instead not above the paragraph.