Assignment Requirements: Research Proposal
I already did the proposal but the teacher gave me some comments need to be changed — just write the answer for those comments in word document.
Those are the comments:
As discussed when you presented, there are several things that really
need to be tightened up before your proposal is adequate. I would like
you to work on these to provide me with a clearer idea of what you
will do. You do not need to redo the whole proposal, but I would like
you to give me a revision of the following pieces:
1) clear, precise, questions for investigation, that are sufficiently
specific with regard to what you intend to do. (Please go over the
material on research questions). Do not use questions framed so that
there is a yes/no answer.
Rewrite the question to be more about why and how .. Idea about the prediction .
2) describe carefully what you plan to do, making sure it is clearly
related to the questions you have framed. Or, more likely, frame the
questions so that they are relevant to what you plan to do. You need
to give some idea of what kind of prediction you plan to develop, how
it differs from others, and give some reasonable explanation of why
you think it might work better than what otehrs do. If you are
addressing some particular aspect, make that clear. As it stands, it
is not at all clear what you intend to develop.
Relate the plan to the questions how it will be done based on the plan ( make sure the plan to be in 3 months )
idea about the prediction
make the plan easy and clear ( to do this I will do this and then this and then this …. do not worry coz the plan usually change
3) how (in detail) will you evaluate what you have done? If you use a
simulation, how will you ensure that you don’t just simulate what you
have designed your algorithm to address. You need to explain your
analysis and evaluation approach in more detail.
integrate the patterns
1. some ppl do that and the other do that
2. test data : compare how they test data then chose the most way that ppl used to test the data then mention I will this way to test the data because the majority using this way .
I do not need/want the whole proposal – just the above pieces.
They need to provide a coherent and understandable story and plan.
(Also, you mention doing it over 2 years? Is this a Masters by
research? Or a minor thesis? I thought MBR must do the college
research methods, but minor thesis is not 2 years?)
Just make the plan length 3 months
see in the attachment my proposal and other usfull references will help you to understand the topic
HI DEAR WHEN YOU MAKE THE QUESTION, EVALUATION AND THE PLAN PLZ FOCUS IN THE ISSUE OF PREDICTING DEMAND IN CLOUD — DO NOT FOCUS ON THE MARKET THERE IS SOME PROBLEM IN MY PROPOSAL WHEN I MENTION MARKET ON MY PROPOSAL SO DO NOT FOCUS MORE ON MARKET MORE THAN THE PROBLEM ITSELF ( DEMAND PREDICTING ) SEE THE PDF FILE IT HAS GOOD INFORMATION WHICH COULD HELP IN THE SAME PART THAT WE NEED TO CHANGE AND FIX